Story Teller
I'm a story teller, Does this story sound good?
I'm writing a detailed novel. Please tell me if the idea is good. It is a western that takes place as the government starts to bring order to the wild west. The tale is about a infamous outlaw, who is repeatedly dissapointed by his son's handicap at not being able to kill. Dissapointed and frustrated, he shoots his son in the leg and throws him in a lake, leaving him for dead. Weeks later he finds out that his son survived and has joined the government in bringing his father to justice. Does this sound good?
Yes, definitely keep going. Sounds like it belongs on CSI