Etched Pottery
I'ma gonna use the work shard....does it work in this Hai'ku?
pottery shards found
along the dry river's bed
finger nails etched, time
or this version
pottery shards found
along the dry river's bed
fingernails etch time
--supposed to have been use the 'word' shard....teehee!!
thanks y'all!
You got a good one there! No title, as appropriate to Japanese Haiku.
This is only a suggestion, but one in keeping with your images:
Pottery shards found
along the dry river bed,
fingernail etched. Time.
There is a season in Japan, when certain waterways go dry, so you have a season to place the time. You did a CAPITAL job on this one!