Obsidian Knife

Poem Feedback Please?

Just wrote this poem and your input would be greatly appreciated!!
By the way, the french in the last stanza means, "I have seen this before".
Thank you so much!

Sickle cell,
The wry smile
Of the Cheshire Cat moon
Varnishes this obsidian sea

Ghastly palette!
Iron hand to deliver me
Full fathom five,

You swing indolently
And suck from my live toes
A stake, my creator
Double edged navigator.

It is yours, Indian giver.
This cold communion
Of frozen knives welding to me
Like wintry cysts.

Siphon, drain
This pure wine of Christ,
My purity does nothing to burn
Away your foaming lips.

Je l’ai vu auparavant--
O, sweet sanity!
A marauder’s kiss this is.

If you have any title suggestions that would be helpful too... Thanks!

I'd remove the part about sucking toes...that's a little gross.

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